Art criticism; Dramatic criticism; Literature -- History and criticism
But that is not the great way. The great way, from Virgil’s to
Browning’s, is the way of pregnant brevity. And where dialogue _is_
employed in the finer short story, every line of it is bound to be
significant. The short story has no room for the reply that is only
_near_ to being appropriate, and it deserves no pardon for the word
that would not have been certainly employed. It is believed, generally,
and one can well suppose that it is true, that the average dialogue of
the diffuse novel is written quickly. That is in part because so little
of it is really dramatic--is really at all the inevitable word. But the
limited sentences in which, when the narrator must narrate no more, the
persons who have been described in the short story express themselves
on their restricted stage, need, if I dare assert it, to be written
slowly, or, what is better, re-read a score of times, and pruned, and
looked at from without, and surveyed on every side.
But, indeed, of the long story, as well as of the short, may it not be
agreed that on the whole the dialogue is apt to be the least successful
thing? The ordinary reader, of course, will not be dramatic enough
to notice its deficiencies. In humorous dialogue, these are seen
least. Humorous dialogue has a legitimate licence. You do not ask from
it exactitude; you do not nail it down to its statement. But in the
dialogue of the critical moment, when the fire of a little word will
kindle how great a matter, how needful then, and how rare, that the
word be the true one! We do not want laxity, inappropriateness, on the
one hand; nor, on the other, the tortured phraseology of a too resolute
cleverness. And those of us who have a preference--derived, it may be,
from the simpler generation of Dickens--for an unbending when it is
a question of _little_ matters, and, when it is a question of great
ones, for ‘a sincere large accent, nobly plain’--well! there is much
of modern finessing we are hardly privileged to understand. Yet if one
wants an instance, in a long novel, in which the sentence now said at
a white heat is the result, inevitable, burningly true to life, of the
sentence that was said just before, one condones the obscurity that has
had its imitators, and pays one’s tribute of admiration to the insight
of _Diana of the Crossways_.
One of the difficulties of the short story, the short story shares with
the acted drama, and that is the indispensableness of compression--the
need that every sentence shall tell--the difference being, that in
the acted drama it must tell for the moment, it must tell till it is
found out, and in the short story it must tell for at least a _modest_
eternity, and something more, if that be possible--for if a ‘Fortnight
is eternity’ upon the Stock Exchange, a literary eternity is, perhaps,
forty years.
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