English poetry -- 19th century -- History and criticism; Pre-Raphaelitism in literature
Although the lattice had dropped loose,
There was no wind; the heat
Being so at rest that Amelotte
Heard far beneath the plunge and float
Of a hound swimming in the moat.
Some minutes since, two rooks had toiled
Home to the nests that crowned
Ancestral ash-trees. Through the glare
Beating again, they seemed to tear
With that thick caw the woof o' the air.
One must have been in the tower of a castle to feel the full force of
the first stanza. The two girls are in a room perhaps one hundred and
fifty or two hundred feet above the water of the moat, so that except
in a time of extraordinary stillness they would not hear ordinary
sounds from so far below. And notice that the poet does not tell us
that this was because the air did not move; he says that the heat was
at rest. Very expressive--in great summer heat, without wind, the
air itself seems to our senses not air but fluid heat. And the same
impression of summer is given by the description of the two crows
flying to their nest and back again, and screaming as they fly. The
poet does not say that they flew; he says they toiled home--because
flying in that thick warm air is difficult for them. When they return
he uses another word, still more impressive; he says they beat again
through the glare. This makes you hear the heavy motion of the wings.
And he describes the crow as seeming to tear the air, because that air
is so heavy that it seems like a thing woven.
Here is a strangely powerful stanza describing the difficulty of
speaking about a painful subject that for many years one has tried to
forget:
Her thought, long stagnant, stirred by speech,
Gave her a sick recoil;
As, dip thy fingers through the green
That masks a pool,--where they have been
The naked depth is black between.
Any of you who as boys have played about a castle moat, and stirred the
green water weeds covering the still water, must have remarked that
the water looks black as ink underneath. Of course it is not black in
itself; but the weeds keep out the sun, so that it seems black because
of the shadow. The poet's comparison has a terrible exactness here.
The mind is compared to stagnant water covered with water-weeds. Weeds
grow upon water in this way only when there has been no wind for a long
time, and no current. The condition of a mind that does not think, that
dares not think, is like stagnant water in this way. Memory becomes
covered up with other things, matters not relating to the past.
Now we can take four stanzas from the scene of the secret family
meeting, after the shame has been confessed and is known. They are very
powerful.
"Time crept. Upon a day at length
My kinsfolk sat with me:
That which they asked was bare and plain:
I answered: the whole bitter strain
Was again said, and heard again.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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