French fiction -- Translations into English; Short stories, French -- Translations into English
_The Taking of the Redoubt_ resembles _Carmen_ in this, that the author
so completely effaces his personality from the teller of the story,
that one finds it easier to suppose than not that the incident was
related to him, as he says in the prefatory note, by the officer to
whom it happened, and that he merely wrote it down from memory. The
concession, however, concedes nothing, as long as the word “memory”
is retained in the explanation. For what it stands for here is an
imagination that could make the carelessly dropped incident its own,
and turn upon it a marvellous sight (lens-eye and light, all in one),
until what we read was as clear to Mérimée as it is to us now. Then he
wrote it down in the pages that are without a match in the thousands
of descriptions of battles that have been written. As one does not go
to another for words to describe what one sees oneself, so we need no
interpreter of our sensations when we read _The Taking of the Redoubt_.
It is for us alone, as Mérimée seems to tell us, to read it or not to
read it, to see what took place or not see it.
In the list of Mérimée’s stories _Mateo Falcone_ stands immediately
before _The Taking of the Redoubt_. Both were published in the same
year, in 1829, which was the twenty-sixth of the author’s age. It is
so seldom mentioned now in English without Walter Pater’s judgment
upon it, “perhaps the cruellest story in the world,” that that might
well be added to the name as a sub-title. It would be so, perhaps, if
Mérimée had not related it. He himself, despite the cold impassivity
that he had schooled himself into maintaining as an author,--he himself
shows here and there a trace of the emotion that he arouses in us.
The temptation, fall, and punishment of the little child touch indeed
the most sensitive nerve in the human heart; the one that can give
the keenest pain; that cuts through the heart like a knife. The story
would be well-nigh unbearable in another hand than Mérimée’s, or had he
told it in a clean, clear thrust of reality, as in _The Taking of the
Redoubt_. But he retards the action in the beginning with details and
diverts the attention with local colour; not, however, be it remarked,
such local colour as he saw with his own eyes, in Spain, but the kind
that he learned how to make so easily in the days of _Clara Gazul_ and
_La Guzla_, that he lost, as he confesses, all respect for it. Mateo,
Gianetto, Gamba, and Giuseppa belong also to the domain of the not
seen, not known. But the child, the unfortunate Fortunato, stands out
against the artificial background of place, time, and circumstance,
with a vividness of reality that, as in _The Taking of the Redoubt_,
would make the reality seem vague and indistinct beside it. A few pages
of this story might be cited as the highest point that Mérimée attained
as an artist.
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