Readers and Writers (1917-1921)Orage, A. R. (Alfred Richard)
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Readers and Writers (1917-1921)
Orage, A. R. (Alfred Richard)
Literature, Modern -- History and criticism
WHEN SHALL WE TRANSLATE?—There is nothing particularly “masterly” from
the modern English point of view in Hobbes’s translation of Pericles’s
_Funeral Oration_. His period of English prose appears to have been
ill-adapted for the translation of the Greek idiom of the time of
Pericles. To the usual cautions against translations in general, we ought
to add the caution against translations made in dissimilar epochs. It is
not at any time in the history of a language that a translation from a
foreign language can safely be undertaken. In all probability, indeed,
the proper period for translation is no longer in point of time than the
period within which the original itself was written. If the Periclean
Age lasted, let us say, fifty years, it is within a period in English
history of the same length that an adequate translation can be made.
Once let that period go by, and a perfect translation will be for ever
impossible. And equally the result will be a failure, if the translation
is attempted before its time has come. I do not think that the Hobbesian
period of English was in key with the period of Periclean Greek; nor,
again, do I think that our period for perfect translation has yet come.
A “masterpiece” of translation of Pericles’s _Oration_ is still, in my
opinion, to be done. But I am confident that we are approaching the
proper period, and in proof of this I would remark on the superiority of
Jowett’s translation over that of Hobbes. Jowett, as a writer of original
English, nobody, I think, would compare with Hobbes of Malmesbury. Hobbes
was a great pioneer, a creator of language; Jowett was only a good
writer. Nevertheless, the idiom in which Jowett wrote, was more nearly
perfect (that is, fully developed) English than the idiom in which Hobbes
wrote. And since, in point of development, the correspondence between
Periclean Greek and Jowett’s English is closer than the correspondence
between Periclean Greek and Hobbes’s English, Jowett’s translation is
nearer the original than Hobbes’s.
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