Readers and Writers (1917-1921)Orage, A. R. (Alfred Richard)
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Readers and Writers (1917-1921)
Orage, A. R. (Alfred Richard)
Literature, Modern -- History and criticism
It would be a pleasant exercise in style to criticise Jowett’s
translation, and a still more profitable exercise to amend it. To a mere
student of comparative values in Periclean Greek and idiomatic English,
some of the errors in Jowett’s translation are obvious. Such a student
needs not to refer with the scholar’s precision to the original Greek
to be able, with the approval of all men of taste, to pronounce that
such and such a phrase or word is most certainly not what may be called
Periclean _English_. It stands to the totality of reason that it is not
so. We may be certain, for instance, that Pericles, were he delivering
his _Oration_ in English, with all the taste and training he possessed
as a Greek of his age, would never have employed such phrases as these:
“commended the law-giver,” “a worthy thing,” “burial to the dead,”
“reputation ... imperilled on ... the eloquence,” “who knows the facts,”
“suspect exaggeration.” Pericles, we cannot but suppose both from the man
and his age, spoke with studied simplicity, that is to say, with perfect
naturalness. The words and phrases he used were in all probability the
most ordinary to the ear of the Athenian, and well within the limits of
serious conversation. But such phrases as I have mentioned are not of
the same English character; they are written, not spoken phrases, and
approximate more to a leading commemorative article in _The Times_ than
to a speech we should all regard as excellent. It would be interesting to
have Lord Rosebery’s version of Pericles’ speech, or even Mr. Asquith’s.
Both, it is probable, would be nearer the original than Jowett’s, though
still some distance off perfection. In another fifty years perfection
will be reached.
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