The Aftermath; Or, Gleanings from a Busy Life: Called upon the outer cover, for purposes of sale, Caliban's Guide to LettersBelloc, Hilaire
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The Aftermath; Or, Gleanings from a Busy Life: Called upon the outer cover, for purposes of sale, Caliban's Guide to Letters
Belloc, Hilaire
Authorship; Satire
The student will, at some time or another, have suffered strong
emotions. He will have desired to give them metrical form. He
will have done so--and commonly he will have gone no further. I
have before as I write a verse, the opening of one of the most
unsuccessful poems ever written. It runs:--
“I am not as my fathers were,
I cannot pass from sleep to sleep,
Or live content to drink the deep
Contentment of the common air.”
This is very bad. It is bad because it proceeded from a deep
emotion only, and shot out untrammelled. It has no connection with
verse as an art, and yet that art lies open for any young man who
will be patient and humble, and who will _learn_.
His first business is to decide at once between the only two styles
possible in manufactured verse, the Obscure and the Prattling. I
say “the _only_ two styles” because I don’t think you can tackle
the Grandiose, and I am quite certain you couldn’t manage the
Satiric. I know a young man in Red Lion Square who can do the
Grandiose very well, and I am going to boom him when I think the
time has come; but the Student-in-Ordinary cannot do it, so he may
put it out of his head.
I will take the Simple or Prattling style first. Choose a subject
from out of doors, first because it is the fashion, and secondly
because you can go and observe it closely. For you must know that
manufactured verse is very like drawing, and in both arts you have
to take a model and be careful of details. Let us take (_e.g._) a
Pimpernel.
A Pimpernel is quite easy to write about; it has remarkable habits,
it is not gross or common. It would be much harder to write about
grass, for instance, or parsley.
First you write down anything that occurs to you, like this:--
“Pretty little Pimpernel,
May I learn to love you well?”
You continue on the style of “Twinkle, twinkle.”
“Hiding in the mossy shade,
Like a lamp of ¯˘ made,
Or a gem by fairies dropt
In their ...”
and there you stick, just as you had got into the style of the
“L’Allegro.” I have no space or leisure to give the student the
full treatment of so great a subject, how he would drag in the
closing and opening of the flower, and how (skilfully avoiding the
word “dell”) he would end his ten or fifteen lines by a repetition
of the first (an essential feature of the Prattling style). I will
confine myself to showing him what may be made of these ridiculous
six lines.
The first has an obvious fault. It runs too quickly, and one falls
all over it. We will keep “Little” and put it first, so one might
write “Little Purple Pimpernel.” But even that won’t do, though the
alliteration is well enough. What change can we make?
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