The collected works of Henrik Ibsen, Vol. 04 (of 11)Ibsen, Henrik
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The collected works of Henrik Ibsen, Vol. 04 (of 11)
Ibsen, Henrik
Ibsen, Henrik, 1828-1906 -- Translations into English; Norwegian drama -- Translations into English
We had no precedent—within our knowledge, at any rate—to guide us, and
were forced to lay down our own laws. Even at the risk of falling
between two stools, we proposed to ourselves a dual purpose. We sought
to produce a translation which should convey to the general reader some
faint conception of the movement and colour, the wit and pathos, of the
original, and at the same time a transcript which should serve the
student as a “crib” to the Norwegian text. This, then, the reader must
be good enough to bear in mind: that the following version is designed
to facilitate, not to supersede, the study of the original. But, apart
from our desire to provide a “crib” to _Peer Gynt_, we felt that, in
taking the liberty of suppressing the rhymes, we abjured our right to
any other liberty whatsoever. A rhymed paraphrase of a great poem may
have a beauty of its own; an unrhymed version must be no paraphrase, but
a faithful transcript, else “the ripple of laughing rhyme” has been
sacrificed in vain. Our fundamental principle then, has been to
represent the original _line for line_; and to this principle we have
adhered with the utmost fidelity. There are probably not fifty cases in
the whole poem in which a word has been transferred from one line to
another, and then only some pronoun or auxiliary verb. It is needless to
say that in adhering to this principle we have often had to resist
temptation. Many cases presented themselves in which greater clearness,
grace, and vigour might easily have been attained by transferring a word
or phrase from this line to that, or even altering the sequence of a
whole group of lines. In no case have we yielded to such temptation,
feeling that, our rule once relaxed, we should insensibly but inevitably
lapse into mere paraphrase. Temptation beset us with especial force in
the less vital passages of the poem. In these places it would have been
easy to give our rendering some approach to grace and point by
disregarding inversions and other defects of expression, justified in
the original by the wit and spirit of the rhymes, but of course deprived
in our transcript of any such excuse. Here, as elsewhere, we were proof
against temptation; it is for our readers to decide whether our
constancy was heroic or pedantic.
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