The collected works of Henrik Ibsen, Vol. 04 (of 11) — John Shaqi
The collected works of Henrik Ibsen, Vol. 04 (of 11)Ibsen, Henrik
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The collected works of Henrik Ibsen, Vol. 04 (of 11)
Ibsen, Henrik
Ibsen, Henrik, 1828-1906 -- Translations into English; Norwegian drama -- Translations into English
The principles which have guided us in the following transcript demand a
few words of explanation. _Peer Gynt_ is written from first to last in
rhymed verse. Six or eight different measures are employed in the
various scenes, and the rhymes are exceedingly rich and complex. The
frequency of final light syllables in Norwegian implies an exceptional
abundance of double rhymes, and Ibsen has taken full advantage of this
peculiarity. In the short first scene of the second act, for example,
twenty-five out of the forty lines end in double rhymes, and there are
three double-rhymed triplets. The tintinnabulation of these double
rhymes, then, gives to most of the scenes a metrical character which it
might puzzle Mr. Swinburne himself to reproduce in English. Moreover,
the ordinary objections to rhymed translations seemed to apply with
exceptional force in the case of _Peer Gynt_. The characteristic quality
of its style is its vernacular ease and simplicity. It would have been
heart-breaking work (apart from its extreme difficulty) to substitute
for this racy terseness the conventional graces of English poetic
diction, padding here and perverting there. To a prose translation, on
the other hand, the objections seemed even greater. It is possible to
give in prose some faint adumbration of epic dignity; but we had here no
epic to deal with. We found (though the statement may at first seem
paradoxical) that the same vernacular simplicity of style which forbade
a translation in rhyme, was no less hostile to a translation in prose.
The characteristic quality of the poet’s achievement lay precisely in
his having, by the aid of rhythm and rhyme, transfigured the most easy
and natural dialogue, without the least sacrifice of its naturalness.
Entirely to eliminate these graces of form would have been to reduce the
poem to prose indeed. It seemed little better than casting a silver
statue into the crucible and asking the world to divine from the ingot
something of the sculptor’s power. A prose translation, in short, could
not but strip Fantasy of its pinions, rob Satire of its barbs. The poet
himself, moreover, expressly declared that he would rather let _Peer
Gynt_ remain untranslated than see it rendered in prose. After a good
deal of reflection and experiment, we finally suggested to him a middle
course between prose and rhyme: a translation as nearly as possible in
the metres of the original, but with the rhymes suppressed. To this
compromise he assented, and the following pages are the result.
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