Epic poetry, Italian -- Translations into English; Hell -- Poetry; Italian poetry -- To 1400 -- Translations into English
No poem in any tongue is more informed with rhythmic life than the
Divine Comedy. And yet, such is its extraordinary distinction, no poem
has an intellectual and emotional substance more independent of its
metrical form. Its complex structure, its elaborate measure and rhyme,
highly artificial as they are, are so mastered by the genius of the
poet as to become the most natural expression of the spirit by which
the poem is inspired; while at the same time the thought and sentiment
embodied in the verse is of such import, and the narrative of such
interest, that they do not lose their worth when expressed in the prose
of another tongue; they still have power to quicken imagination, and to
evoke sympathy.
In English there is an excellent prose translation of the Inferno, by
Dr. John Carlyle, a man well known to the reader of his brother’s
Correspondence. It was published forty years ago, but it is still
contemporaneous enough in style to answer every need, and had Dr.
Carlyle made a version of the whole poem I should hardly have cared to
attempt a new one. In my translation of the Inferno I am often Dr.
Carlyle’s debtor. His conception of what a translation should be is
very much the same as my own. Of the Purgatorio there is a prose
version which has excellent qualities, by Mr. W. S. Dugdale. Another
version of great merit, of both the Purgatorio and Paradiso, is that of
Mr. A. J. Butler. It is accompanied by a scholarly and valuable
comment, and I owe much to Mr. Butler’s work. But through what seems to
me occasional excess of literal fidelity his English is now and then
somewhat crabbed. “He overacts the office of an interpreter,” I cite
again from Howell, “who doth enslave himself too strictly to words or
phrases. One may be so over-punctual in words that he may mar the
matter.”
I have tried to be as literal in my translation as was consistent with
good English, and to render Dante’s own words in words as nearly
correspondent to them as the difference in the languages would permit.
But it is to be remembered that the familiar uses and subtle
associations which give to words their full meaning are never
absolutely the same in two languages. Love in English not only SOUNDS
but IS different from amor in Latin, or amore in Italian. Even the most
felicitous prose translation must fail therefore at times to afford the
entire and precise meaning of the original.
Moreover, there are difficulties in Dante’s poem for Italians, and
there are difficulties in the translation for English readers. These,
where it seemed needful, I have endeavored to explain in brief
footnotes. But I have desired to avoid distracting the attention of the
reader from the narrative, and have mainly left the understanding of it
to his good sense and perspicacity. The clearness of Dante’s
imaginative vision is so complete, and the character of his narration
of it so direct and simple, that the difficulties in understanding his
intention are comparatively few.
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