Orators -- Greece; Oratory, Ancient; Speeches, addresses, etc., Greek -- History and criticism
The use of parenthesis is sometimes carried by Andocides to extremes. An
instance has been quoted in which the grammatical construction breaks
down because the writer introduces an imaginary conversation into the
middle of it.[111] The style is sometimes so loose and discursive that
not only is the construction difficult to follow, but the argument is
obscure. The writer suffers from an inability to keep to the point, or
rather, he tries to explain several things at once, and so makes nothing
clear. An extreme instance is to be found in §§ 57 _sqq._ of the _de
Mysteriis_. His thoughts run too fast for his tongue, and he has not the
technical skill to guide them on their proper courses. Such sentences
afford a practical comment on the introduction to the same speech, in
which he states that he does not know where to begin.[112]
On the other hand, passages may be found in which a series of short
sentences, loosely combined, and disturbed by _anacoluthon_, are really
effective, since they simulate the broken utterance of passion. Of such
is the following:
‘Then the herald inquired who had deposited the suppliant’s
branch, and no one answered. Now we were standing close by,
and Callias could see me. When nobody answered, he retired into
the temple. Eucles, stepping forward—oblige me by calling him
up—Now then, Eucles, first of all give evidence whether I am
speaking the truth.’[113]
§ 4
I have dealt hitherto chiefly with the speech _de Mysteriis_, the best
of Andocides’ work. The other speeches now demand a short mention. The
_de Reditu_ differs remarkably from the later speech, _de Mysteriis_,
but it is chiefly a difference of tone. The verbal style is much the
same, though there is rather more tendency to antithetical structure. The
language is simple, the sentences are less hampered with parentheses.
But here Andocides is humble; he appears as a young man without friends
speaking before a critical and hostile assembly; he is moderate in
his language, apologetic in tone, careful not to give offence by any
sarcastic or ill-considered utterance. In the _de Mysteriis_ he is
speaking with the consciousness not of a better cause but of increased
powers and an assured position in the State. He is confident, almost
arrogant at times; he is bitter and violent in his attacks on his enemies.
The _de Pace_ bears a general resemblance in style to the other speeches,
except for certain grammatical peculiarities. Dionysius declared it to be
spurious, but modern critics mostly regard it as genuine.
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