Harkins had cleared his desk pretty well in the past few minutes and his
assistants were busy in consequence. He slapped the masterpiece
irreverently on the desk. Like a withering blast his trained eyes swept
the first page, which was heavily laden with elaborate introduction.
There were a few fierce swoops of a blue pencil. Words fell in the ranks
like scattered skirmishers, then platoons of phrases were swept away.
The enfiladed page fell face down on the desk. Another, similarly
mangled, followed. Only a few gallant remnants of that imposing array
remained. It was the survival of the fittest, the obliteration of the
superfluous; but it was hard. Mead watched the sacrifice in slow,
gathering horror.
Harkins looked up. "Busy night!" said he abruptly but not unkindly.
"Anyway, this won't do. Cultivate the newspaper style. Get brevity,
terseness. Cut out excess baggage. Get the right word and fit it in
right. You're voluminous. Make it luminous."
Harkins resumed the massacre and Mead, poor innocent, walked
disconsolately to his desk to digest the bitter pill that must
invariably be administered to the newspaper novice. At Mead's age the
simultaneous discovery that there are things to learn and things to
unlearn is disconcerting. He sat discouraged, his pinions drooping, and
stared gloomily at some gyrating millers about the electric bulb over
his desk. Presently he tried to catch them, with a half-acknowledged
desire to pluck off their wings in a little game of "pass it on." But
they were elusive and evaded him.
Several men came in from assignments, and removing their coats, for a
hot wave was grilling the late days of June, set to work. Smallwood and
Lynn, back from the convention, left thick wads of copy on the city
editor's desk and went out for a late lunch. More reporters entered
hurriedly and fell to. The dramatic editor entered with deliberation, as
became the great, and leisurely set about the roasting of a "first
night." Copy boys scurried like scampering ants. The editors bent to
their tasks, the reporters' fingers rushed over the pads or jingled the
typewriter keys. Everybody hit up the pace but the dramatic critic. He
sat, pencil poised like a poniard, deliberating whether he should slay
the piece and principals by slow torture, like an Indian, or perform
the deed with one murderous lunge. The proprietors of this particular
theatre had fallen out with the business office of the Courier. They did
not advertise in the Courier now, so when the dramatic critic attended
their house he paid for his seat and charged it to expense account.
Naturally, what the Courier said about the attractions at that house,
during the season in question, was not what it would have said had the
brethren been dwelling together in amity.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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