=16. PER IMMENSAS AERE LAPSA VIAS.= Similar phrasing at _EP_ III iii 77-78
(Amor speaking) 'ut tamen aspicerem consolarerque iacentem, / _lapsa per
immensas est mea penna uias_'.
=17. QVO NON TIBI CARIOR ALTER.= Compare _Tr_ III vi 3 'nec te mihi carior
alter', _Tr_ IV vi 46 'qua nulla mihi carior, uxor', and _EP_ II viii 27
'per patriae nomen, quae te tibi carior ipso est'.
=18. CANDIDVS ET FELIX PROXIMVS ANNVS ERIT.= Compare _Fast_ I 63-64 'ecce
tibi _faustum_, Germanice, nuntiat _annum_ / inque meo primus carmine
Ianus adest'. No doubt both passages echo the phrasing of a New Year
wish or prayer.
=18. CANDIDVS.= 'Favourable'. Compare _Tr_ V v 13-14 (on his wife's
birthday) 'optime natalis! quamuis procul absumus, opto / _candidus_
huc uenias', Prop IV i 67-68 'Roma, faue, tibi surgit opus, date
_candida_ ciues / omina, et inceptis dextera cantet auis!', and _Fast_ I
79-80 'uestibus intactis Tarpeias itur in arces, / et populus _festo
concolor_ ipse suo est'.
=19. DIXIT ET= has a definite epic flavour, being found in Virgil at _Aen_
I 402 & 736, II 376, III 258, IV 659, V 477, VI 677, VIII 366 & 615, IX
14, X 867, XI 561 & 858, XII 266 & 681, and _G_ IV 499; from Ovid
compare _Met_ I 466-67 'dixit et eliso percussis aere pennis / impiger
umbrosa Parnasi constitit arce', I 762 'dixit et implicuit materno
bracchia collo', III 474, IV 162 & 576, V 230 & 419, VIII 101, and VIII
757. A close parallel at _EP_ III iii 93-94 (Amor has been speaking with
Ovid) 'dixit et aut ille est tenues dilapsus in auras, / coeperunt
sensus aut uigilare mei'.
=22. EXCIDIT.= 'I forgot'; the opposite of _subit_ 'I remember'. The idiom
is standard Latin (_OLD excido1_ 9b); Ovidian instances at _Her_ XII 71,
_Am_ II i 18, _Met_ VIII 449-50 'excidit omnis / luctus et a lacrimis in
poenae uersus amorem est', _Met_ XIV 139, _Fast_ V 315, _Tr_ I v 14,
_EP_ II iv 24, and _EP_ II x 8 'exciderit tantum ne tibi cura mei'.
=23. VBI ... RESERAVERIS ANNVM.= 'When you have unlocked the year'. Compare
Ovid's descriptions of Janus at _Fast_ I 99 'tenens baculum dextra
_clauemque_ sinistra' and _Fast_ I 253-54 '"nil mihi cum bello: pacem
postesque tuebar / et" _clauem_ ostendens "haec" ait "arma gero"'.
=23. LONGVM ANNVM.= André translates, 'l'année longue à venir', citing Cic
_Phil_ V 1 'Nihil umquam longius his Kalendiis Ianuariis mihi uisum
est', to which _OLD longus_ 14a adds (among other passages) Caesar _BG_
I 40 13 'in longiorem diem collaturus' and Sen _Ep_ 63 3 'non differo in
_longius_ tempus'; but the meaning 'far off' seems unsuited to the
present context. _Longum_ should be taken in its usual sense; it perhaps
emphasizes that the whole year is still ahead.
=24. SACRO MENSE.= _Sacer_ because of the religious ceremonies marking the
New Year.
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