Epic poetry, German -- Translations into English; Nibelungen -- Poetry
This translation is based on the text of Bartsch (edit. 1886), but the
strophes of MS. C have been incorporated with it, so that it thus
corresponds with the widely read modern German version of Simrock. For
the English reader it may be explained that a marginal C denotes that
the four lines which follow are taken from that source, and he will
note that their ethical tendency is designed to be cumulative, to
excite and maintain sympathy for the murdered hero and his widow, and
to supply what justification can be found for her revenge. They appeal
to the modern reader's sense of justice, and are in themselves
poetically not unworthy of being included, as they often elaborate a
picturesque or stirring scene, and add touches of beauty, tenderness,
or pathos which we could not wish away.
The metre adopted is that on which William Morris fixed, with true
poetic instinct, for his _Story of Sigurd_, the great sister-poem to
the _Nibelungenlied_, from which, indeed, he really seems to have
taken it, as it preserves the "ringing caesura" of that original, and,
accentually, the same measure. It is not in essentials different from
that of the Middle High German text, for the basis of that is
accentual and not numerical, though other translators have thought
that it was {P. xx} best reproduced by rigidly adhering to an iambic
structure. This, in a long poem, is apt to have a somewhat heavy,
monotonous effect, whereas the anapaestic-iambic measure not only
secures something of the lightness of the movement of the original,
but has for English readers a variety, freedom and swiftness, a
"lilt," which has made it of late years widely popular.
The old division into "strophes" has been discarded. It has always
seemed to me a literary offence so to print an epic as to convey the
suggestion that it is but a long ballad. I cannot help thinking that
this device was one adopted for convenience' sake by the mediaeval
reciters or chanters of the _Lied_, as was the gap in the line after
the caesura, to mark artificially the cadence of the line. These,
however, have a somewhat pedantic, formal, and so irritating effect on
the modern reader who wants to enter into the spirit of an epic. The
literary argument against the division into strophes is well stated by
Bartsch: "I do not think that, fine as the Nibelungen strophe is in
itself, and admirably as it lends itself to lyric treatment, its
employment for the epic was a happy inspiration. A division into
regular strophes is altogether antagonistic to the Epic: the even flow
of the epic narrative does indeed require pauses, not, however, at
prescribed, but at free intervals. And this principle we see
invariably adhered to wherever a true epic has developed itself, in
India, in Greece, in France."
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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