22. Begin then, and, with simple language, do not spend sententious
thoughts and witty sayings on family trifles, which is all that the
familiar talk of two or three people is representing. But when the
character who is introduced persuades, counsels or dissuades, then
there should be gravity and wit; for then doubtless is truth
observed, since a man speaks in a different style from what is common
when he gives counsel, or persuades, or argues against anything.
Aristides, the rhetorician, gave us warrant for this; for he wishes
the language of comedy to be pure, clear, and flexible, and he adds
also that it should be taken from the usage of the people, this being
different from that of polite society; for in the latter case the
diction will be elegant, sonorous, and adorned. Do not drag in
quotations, nor let your language offend because of exquisite words;
for, if one is to imitate those who speak, it should not be by the
language of Panchaia, of the Metaurus, of hippogriffs, demi-gods and
centaurs.
23. If the king should speak, imitate as much as possible the gravity
of a king; if the sage speak, observe a sententious modesty; describe
lovers with those passions which greatly move whoever listens to
them; manage soliloquies in such a manner that the recitant is quite
transformed, and in changing himself, changes the listener. Let him
ask questions and reply to himself, and if he shall make plaints, let
him observe the respect due to women. Let not ladies disregard their
character, and if they change costumes, let it be in such wise that
it may be excused; for male disguise usually is very pleasing. Let
him be on his guard against impossible things, for it is of the
chiefest importance that only the likeness of truth should be
represented. The lackey should not discourse of lofty affairs, nor
express the conceits which we have seen in certain foreign plays; and
in no wise let the character contradict himself in what he has said;
I mean to say, forget,--as in Sophocles one blames Oedipus for not
remembering that he has killed Laius with his own hand. Let the
scenes end with epigram, with wit, and with elegant verse, in such
wise that, at his exit, he who spouts leave not the audience
disgusted. In the first act set forth the case. In the second weave
together the events, in such wise that until the middle of the third
act one may hardly guess the outcome. Always trick expectancy; and
hence it may come to pass that something quite far from what is
promised may be left to the understanding. Tactfully suit your verse
to the subjects being treated. _Décimas_ are good for complainings;
the sonnet is good for those who are waiting in expectation; recitals
of events ask for _romances_, though they shine brilliantly in
_octavas._ _Tercets_ are for grave affairs and _redondillas_ for
affairs of love. Let rhetorical figures be brought in, as repetition
or anadiplosis, and in the beginning of these same verses the various
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