The Romaunce of the Sowdone of Babylone and of Ferumbras His Sone Who Conquerede Rome
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The Romaunce of the Sowdone of Babylone and of Ferumbras His Sone Who Conquerede Rome
Charlemagne, Emperor, 742-814 -- Romances; English poetry -- Middle English, 1100-1500; Romances, English
p. 15, l. 510. «oon» makes no sense. I suspect the reading of this
and the following stanza is quite corrupt. If ll. 510 and 511 should
belong to different stanzas, the «enjambement», or continuation of the
[p106] sense from one stanza to another, would be unusually strong.
I am therefore inclined to think that originally a stanza began at l.
510, and that there is a line wanting after l. 509, which contained
the rhyme to «bon» (l. 508). The scribe noticing the absence of rhyme
tried to restore it himself. Adding «oon» to l. 510, he made it rhyme
with «bon» (l. 508). Having thus destroyed the rhyme of ll. 510 and 512
(«Alisaundre» : «Cassaundre», as in l. 984), he added «gaye» to l. 512,
which now rhymed to l. 514, where he still added «to fraye». In order
to get a rhyme to l. 518, he changed in l. 516 the original «laye»
(: «Romayne») into «lan» (“he ceased, stopped”), and wrote “«to»”
«the grounde» instead of “«on»” (cf. l. 1186) or “«at»” (cf. ll. 533,
435) «the grounde», connecting thus these words with l. 515, whereas
originally they belonged to «there he laye», or—as «there» also may
have been added by the scribe—to «he laye». If now we read «with mayne»
instead of «ful evene», in l. 521, we get a perfect rhyme to l. 519; l.
520 having lost its rhyming line, he made it rhyme, by adding «than» to
l. 522, which originally rhymed to l. 524. Now to get a rhyme to l. 524
he composed and inserted himself l. 526. Therefore I think the original
reading of these two stanzas ran as follows:
Sir Ferumbras of Alisaundre 510
That bolde man was in dede,
Uppon a steede Cassaundre
He roode in riche weede.
Sir Bryer of Poyle a Romayne 514
He bare through with a spere;
Dede on the ground [there] he laye,
Might he no more hem dere.
That saw Huberte, a worthy man, 518
Howe Briere was islayne,
Ferumbras to quite than
To him he rode with mayne.
With a spere uppone his shelde 522
Stiffly gan he strike;
The shelde he brake imiddis the feelde,
His hawberke wolde not breke.
Ferumbras was agreved tho, &c. 526
On the rhyme «Romayne» : «laye» (l. 514) cf. ll. 536, 890.
p. 15, l. 514. «Bryer of Poyle» does not occur in any of the other
versions.
p. 15, l. 516. «lan», preterite of «lin», “to cease;” more common in
the compound «blin», contracted from * «be-lin».
p. 15, l. 517. «might he no more hem dere.» On the order of words, cf.
ll. 2954, 649, 2435.
p. 16, l. 520. «qwite», “to requite, reward, retaliate, pay off.” See
below note to l. 780.
p. 16, l. 531. On «stronge» (O.E. strang) : «istonge» (O.E. gestungen),
see «Introduction», p. xxxv.
p. 16, l. 532. «astraye», “out of the right way or proper place,
running [p107] about without guidance.” O.French «estraier», which is
derived from Latin «ex strada», see Diez, «Etym. Wörterb.» I. 402; II.
296.
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