The Shakespeare-Expositor: An Aid to the Perfect Understanding of Shakespeare's PlaysKeightley, Thomas
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The Shakespeare-Expositor: An Aid to the Perfect Understanding of Shakespeare's Plays
Keightley, Thomas
Drama -- Outlines, syllabi, etc.; Shakespeare, William, 1564-1616 -- Outlines, syllabi, etc.
_2. Sen._ "Weapons, weapons," etc.
So the speech is given in the folio. In the Globe Shakespeare it is
given _Senators, etc._, and what follows as the discordant cries of the
various parties, which certainly seems to be more effective.
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"Come, try upon yourselves what you have seen me _do_."
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"Lay hands upon him.--Help Marcius, help, _help_!"
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_Com._ "Stand fast
We have as many friends as enemies."
I think this should be _Cor._, and I have so given it.
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_Cor._ "Come, sir, along with us."
This speech evidently belongs to _Com._
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"Leave us to cure this cause.--For 'tis a sore upon us,
You cannot tent yourself."
I think we should either omit 'upon us,' or for 'us' read _you_.
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_Cor._ "I would they were barbarians, as they are,
Though in Rome litter'd, not Romans, as they are not,
Though calv'd in the porch o' the Capitol!...
_Men._ Begone,
Put not your worthy rage into your tongue."
So, I think judiciously, Tyrwhitt arranges, and he has been generally
and properly followed. The folio gives the whole to Menenius, to whom
it is not at all suited.
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"Or Jove for 's power to thunder. His heart 's his mouth."
I would read '_in_ his mouth.' "My voice is in my sword" (Macb. v. 7).
"He wears his tongue in his arms" (Tr. and Cress. iii. 3).
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"To eject him hence
Were but one danger, and to keep him here
Our certain death."
I read _our_ for 'one,' as Theobald also proposed. In Ant. and Cleop.
(i. 4) we have "_One_ great competitor," where the sense demands _our_;
and in Son. xcix. "_Our_ blushing shame," where editors read, as sense
requires, _One_.
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"Form [in peace] to his utmost peril."
I omit 'in peace,' as it had just occurred, is needless, and disturbs
the metre.
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SC. 2. "I talk of you."
Here Collier's folio places the entrance of Volumnia, and I think
rightly.
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"O sir, sir, sir!"
The _son, son, son!_ of Collier's folio is much better. She never
elsewhere says _Sir_ to him. See on Meas. for Meas. iii. 1.
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"The thwartings of your dispositions."
'Thwartings' is the emendation of Theobald for _things_ of the folio.
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"I have a heart as little apt as yours,
But yet a brain," etc.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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