The Shakespeare-Expositor: An Aid to the Perfect Understanding of Shakespeare's PlaysKeightley, Thomas
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The Shakespeare-Expositor: An Aid to the Perfect Understanding of Shakespeare's Plays
Keightley, Thomas
Drama -- Outlines, syllabi, etc.; Shakespeare, William, 1564-1616 -- Outlines, syllabi, etc.
A yearly solemn feast she wonts to _make_.
F. Q. ii. 2. 42.
Now, as the rimes are _hold_, _told_, the poet must have written, or
have intended to write, _hold_.
That doth against the dead his hand uprear.
Ib. ii. 8. 29.
Here the word must have been _upheave_, the rimes being _leave_,
_cleave_, _bereave_.
When walking through the garden them she _spied_.
Ib. iii. 6. 40.
As the rimes are _law_, _draw_, we must of course read _saw_.
Of finest gold. The fifth game was a great new standing _bowl_,
To set down both ways. These brought in, Achilles then stood up.
Chapman, Iliads, xxiii. 249.
The right word, it is quite plain, is _cup_.
Or painful to his slumbers; easy, _sweet_,
And as a purling stream, thou son of Night.
Fletch. Valentinian, v. 2.
Here, as it has been shown, the proper word is _light_; yet Mr. Dyce
has not ventured to receive it.
Mi si scoperse; onde mi nacque un _ghiaccio_
Nel core, ed evvi ancora,
E sarà sempre, fin ch'io le sia in braccio.
My late friend Rossetti, in copying out this passage of Petrarca in his
Amor Platonico, etc., wrote _gelo_ for _ghiaccio_, and never saw the
error, even in reading the proof; and so it is printed.
On the other hand, the adjacent or riming lines sometimes terminate in
the same word. There are many instances in Shakespeare, and I have met
with the following in Italian.
Ciascun de' cavalieri ebbe _e sergenti_
Ed al servizio suo donne _e sergenti_.
B. Tasso, Amadigi, xxii. 67.
where, as the rimes show, the first line should end with _una stanza_.
Bears in his boasted fan an Iris _bright_,
When her discoloured bow she spreads through heaven _bright_.
F. Q. iii. 11. 47.
We meet also with places where the sense or the metre, unaided by rime,
must be our guide in correcting--_ex. gr._,
The round earth, heaven's great queen and Pallas to whose bands.
Chapman, Iliads, i. 395.
Here the metre shows that the right word is _Minerva_, not _Pallas_.
There is one most remarkable case of substitution to which sufficient
attention has never been given by the critics. It may be termed
_reaction_ or _repetition_, and arises from the impression made by some
particular word on the mind of the transcriber or printer, or even of
the writer himself.
Thus in a proof-sheet of my Milton I found
A _furnace_ horrible on all sides round,
As one great furnace flamed.
Par. Lost, i. 61.
while the word before the compositor's eyes was _dungeon_.
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