The Singing Church: The Hymns It Wrote and SangLorenz, Edmund S. (Edmund Simon)
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The Singing Church: The Hymns It Wrote and Sang
Lorenz, Edmund S. (Edmund Simon)
Hymns -- History and criticism
“O Lord, our God, arise,
Scatter his enemies,
And make them fall.
Frustrate their knavish tricks,
Confound their politics,
On Him our hearts we fix;
God save the King.”
In Bishop Brooks’ original of “O little town of Bethlehem,” so widely
known and used, the fourth stanza is omitted:
“Where children, pure and happy,
Pray to the Blessed Child;
Where misery cries out to thee,
Son of the Mother mild;
Where charity stands watching,
And faith holds wide the door,
The dark night wakes, the glory breaks,
And Christmas comes once more.”
The reasons are not far to seek: the double rhyme in the third line is
so forced as to be awkward; the first two lines refer to Jesus in the
third person, but the next two in the second; more important still,
the stanza does not make a sufficient addition to the value of the
hymn to warrant the added length.
The stanza,
“Thy body slain, sweet Jesus, thine,
And bathed in its own blood,
While all exposed to wrath divine,
The glorious suff’rer stood,”
if retained, despite its medieval picture of our suffering Lord, would
have added nothing to Watts’ noble hymn, “Alas! and did my Saviour
bleed,” but rather would have hemmed the progress of its thought and
feeling.
Few of the lovers of Robinson’s classic hymn, “Come, Thou Fount of
every blessing,” would have enjoyed singing and visualizing the
omitted fourth stanza,
“O that day when freed from sinning,
I shall see thy lovely face!
_Richly clothed in blood-washed linen_,
How I’ll sing thy sovereign grace!”
A stanza was omitted from a hymn by Isaac Watts by Dr. Worcester, and
he was compelled by public sentiment to replace it in his next
collection. Who was right—Dr. Worcester, or Watts and the church
public?
“But while I bled and groaned and died,
I ruined Satan’s Throne;
High on my cross I hung and spy’d
The monster tumbling down.”
What a travesty in this stanza of Christ’s words, “I beheld Satan as
lightning fall from heaven”!
The omission of all the older hymns regarding “the state of the
unpenitent dead” in our more recent hymnals is due to their usually
rather lurid expressions, going beyond those of the Scriptures, to the
reaction in the church at large against the rather mechanical and
heartless emphasis of the painful doctrine—not only in hymns, but in
sermons as well—and also to the realization that it is not a theme
fitted for singing.
What modern congregation could sing Watts’ stanza formulating the
doctrine,
“Up to the courts where angels dwell,
It [the soul] mounts triumphant there;
Or devils plunge it down to hell
In infinite despair”?
When we come to the hymns constructed by selecting stanzas from long
poems—e.g., by John Keble or by John Greenleaf Whittier—we reach
marvels of skill in selection and co-ordination that have greatly
enriched English hymnody.
_Reconstructing and Rewriting Faulty Hymns._
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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