The Singing Church: The Hymns It Wrote and SangLorenz, Edmund S. (Edmund Simon)
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The Singing Church: The Hymns It Wrote and Sang
Lorenz, Edmund S. (Edmund Simon)
Hymns -- History and criticism
John Wesley inveighed against “hymn-cobblers,” but he was a most
efficient and skillful “hymn-cobbler” himself. He deserves high
commendation for his literary skill and taste in cutting the rough
diamonds that passed through his editorial hands. A few instances will
illustrate his success.
“Before Jehovah’s awful throne” is recognized as one of Watts’ noblest
hymns of worship. But it is Wesley’s reconstruction that brought out
its essential nobility.
Watts began it in rather mechanical fashion,
“Sing to the Lord with joyful voice,
Let every land his name adore;
The British Isles shall send the noise
Across the ocean to the shore.”
Wesley omitted this stanza entirely. Beginning with the second stanza,
“With gladness bow before his throne,
And let his presence raise your joys;
Know that the Lord is God alone
And formed our soul and framed our voice”
(which shows that Watts’ inspiration had begun to rise), Wesley
transformed it into a majestic expression of pure worship:
“Before Jehovah’s awful throne,
Ye nations, bow with sacred joy;
Know that the Lord is God alone,
He can create and he destroy.”
He was equally successful with Watts’ third stanza:
“Infinite power, without our aid,
Figured our clay to human mould;
And when our wandering feet had strayed,
He brought us to his sacred fold.”
The first line is faulty: the accent of “infinite” is on the first
syllable: Watts placed it on the second. The second line conveys no
clear idea: how is clay “figured”? The third and fourth lines are bald
and ordinary, lacking in poetic grace. See how deftly Wesley took
Watts’ material and gave it grace and dignity:
“His sovereign power, without our aid,
Made us of clay and formed us men;
And when like wand’ring sheep we strayed,
He brought us to his fold again.”
Transforming Watts’ fourth stanza in like manner, he added a majestic
fifth stanza of his own:
“Wide as the world is thy command,
Vast as eternity thy love;
Firm as a rock thy truth shall stand
When rolling years shall cease to move,”
completing one of the noblest hymns in the language.
Another hymn of Isaac Watts was enriched by passing through the hands
of John Wesley. Besides correcting minor infelicities and curtailing
its impracticable length, he rewrote the third stanza of the very
popular hymn, “Come, ye that love the Lord,” transforming Watts’
“The God that rules on high
And thunders when he please,
That rides upon the stormy sky
And manages the seas,”
into
“The God that rules on high,
That all the earth surveys,
That rides upon the stormy sky
And calms the roaring seas.”
He might have gone further and obviated the break of the sentence
occurring between the third and fourth stanzas. Some hymnal editors
meet the difficulty by omitting both.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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