The Southern Literary Messenger, Vol. II., No. 6, May, 1836Various
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The Southern Literary Messenger, Vol. II., No. 6, May, 1836
Various
American literature -- 19th century -- Periodicals
introduce more or less obscurity in every sentence where it is so
admitted. Strict syntatical order would require (the pronoun "we"
being followed immediately by "laden") that--not the asses--but
Lieutenant Slidell and his companions should be laden with the various
commodities.
And now, too, we began to see horsemen jantily dressed in slouched
hat, embroidered jacket, and worked spatterdashes, reining fiery
Andalusian coursers, each having the Moorish carbine hung at hand
beside him.
Were horsemen, in this instance, a _generic_ term--that is, did the
word allude to horsemen generally, the use of the "_slouched hat_" and
"_embroidered jacket_" in the singular, would be justifiable--but it
is not so in speaking of individual horsemen, where the plural is
required. The participle "_reining_" properly refers to
"_spatterdashes_," although of course intended to agree with
"_horsemen_." The word "_each_," also meant to refer to the
"_horsemen_," belongs, strictly speaking, to the "_coursers_." The
whole, if construed by the rigid rules of grammar, would imply that
the horsemen were dressed in spatterdashes--which spatterdashes reined
the coursers--and which coursers had each a carbine.
Perhaps these were farmers of the better order; but they had not the
air of men accustomed to labor; they were rather, perhaps, Andalusian
horse-dealers, or, maybe, robbers, of those who so greatly abound
about the capital, who for the moment, had laid aside their
professional character.
This is an exceedingly awkward sentence. The word "_maybe_" is, we
think, objectionable. The repetition of the relative "_who_" in the
phrases "_who so greatly abound_" and "_who for the moment had laid
aside_," is the less to be justified, as each "_who_" has a different
antecedent--the one referring to "_those_" (the robbers, generally,
who abound about the capital) and the other to the suspected
"_robbers_" then present. But the whole is exceeding ambiguous, and
leaves a doubt of the author's true meaning. For, the words
"_Andalusian horse-dealers, or, maybe, robbers of those who abound
about the capital_," may either imply that the men in question were
some of a class of robbers who abounded, &c. or that they were men who
robbed (that is, robbers of) the Andalusian horse-dealers who
abounded, &c. or that they were either Andalusian horse-dealers, or
robbers of those who abound about the capital--i.e. of the inhabitants
of the suburbs. Whether the last "_who_" has reference to _the
robbers_, or to _those who abound_, it is impossible to learn from any
thing in the sentence itself--which, taken altogether, is unworthy of
the merest tyro in the rules of composition.
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