The Story of the Battle Hymn of the Republic — John Shaqi
The Story of the Battle Hymn of the RepublicHall, Florence Howe
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The Story of the Battle Hymn of the Republic
Hall, Florence Howe
Battle hymn of the republic (Song); Howe, Julia Ward, 1819-1910. Battle hymn of the Republic
I have read a fiery gospel, writ in burnished rows of steel:
brings out more clearly the image of the long lines of bayonets as they
glittered in her sight on that autumn afternoon. In the fourth verse
the second line was somewhat vague in the first draft,
He has waked the earth’s dull bosom with a high ecstatic beat,
The allusion was probably to the marching feet of the armed multitude.
The new version,
He is sifting out the hearts of men before his judgment-seat:
is more direct and simple, hence accords better with the deeply
religious tone of the poem.
In the last stanza,
In the whiteness of the lilies he was born across the sea,
now reads,
In the beauty of the lilies Christ was born across the sea,
A number of people have asked the meaning of this line. The allusion
is evidently to the lilies carried by the angel, in pictures of the
annunciation to the Virgin, these flowers being the emblem of purity.
The original version of the second line read,
With a glory in his bosom that shines out on you and me,
The present words,
Transfigures you and me,
give us a clearer and more beautiful image. The passion of the poem
seems, indeed, to lift on high and glorify our poor humanity.
It is interesting to note that my mother associated with her husband
the line,
_He has sounded forth the trumpet that shall never call retreat_;
Not long before her death, new buildings were erected at Watertown,
Massachusetts, for the Perkins Institution for the Blind, founded and
administered for more than forty years by Dr. Howe. His son-in-law,
Michael Anagnos, ably continued the work during thirty more years.
When we were talking about a suitable inscription in memory of the
latter, I suggested to my mother the use of this line. The answer was,
“_No, that is for your father._”
The original draft of the “Battle Hymn” is dated November, 1861; it
was published in the _Atlantic Monthly_ for February, 1862. The verses
were printed on the first page, being thus given the place of honor.
According to the custom of that day, no name was signed to them. James
T. Fields was then editor of the magazine. My mother consulted him with
regard to a name for the poem. It was he, as I think, who christened
it “The Battle Hymn of the Republic.” The price paid for it was five
dollars. But the true price of it was a very different thing, not to
be computed in terms of money. It brought its author name and fame
throughout the civilized world, in addition to the love and honor of
her countrymen. As she grew older and the spiritual beauty of her life
and thought shone out more and more clearly, the affection in which she
was held deepened into something akin to veneration.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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