The Story of the Battle Hymn of the RepublicHall, Florence Howe
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The Story of the Battle Hymn of the Republic
Hall, Florence Howe
Battle hymn of the republic (Song); Howe, Julia Ward, 1819-1910. Battle hymn of the Republic
“In spite of the excitement of the day I went to bed and slept as
usual, but awoke next morning in the gray of the early dawn, and to my
astonishment found that the wished-for lines were arranging themselves
in my brain. I lay quite still until the last verse had completed
itself in my thoughts, then hastily arose, saying to myself, ‘I shall
lose this if I don’t write it down immediately.’ I searched for a sheet
of paper and an old stump of a pen which I had had the night before and
began to scrawl the lines almost without looking, as I had learned to
do by often scratching down verses in the darkened room where my little
children were sleeping. Having completed this, I lay down again and
fell asleep, but not without feeling that something of importance had
happened to me.”
It will be noted that the first draft of the “Battle Hymn” was written
on the back of a sheet of the letter-paper of the Sanitary Commission
on which her husband was then serving. Mr. A. J. Bloor, the assistant
secretary of that body, has called attention to this. His account of
the eventful day is given at the close of this chapter.
My mother gave the original draft of the “Battle Hymn” to her friend,
Mrs. Edwin P. Whipple, “who begged it of me, years ago.” Hence below
the letter-heading:
SANITARY COMMISSION, WASHINGTON, D. C.
TREASURY BUILDING
_1861_
we find the inscription
WILLARD’S HOTEL
JULIA W. HOWE
TO
CHARLOTTE B. WHIPPLE
The draft remained for many years in the possession of the latter,
until it was sent to Messrs. Houghton & Mifflin, in order to have a
facsimile made for the _Reminiscences_.
Mr. and Mrs. Whipple were among the familiar friends of our household
in those days. The former achieved brilliant successes both as a writer
and as a lecturer. He was greatly interested in the anti-slavery
agitation; “His eloquent voice was raised more than once in the cause
of human freedom.” The younger members of our family remember him best
for his ready and delightful wit. The fact that he was decidedly homely
seemed to give additional point to his funny sayings. Mrs. Whipple was
as handsome as her husband was plain--sweet-tempered and sympathetic,
yet not wanting in firmness.
Before publishing the poem the author made a number of changes, all
of which are, as I think, improvements. The last verse, which is an
anticlimax, was cut out altogether.
We find from her letters that she hesitated to allow the publication of
the original draft of the “Battle Hymn”[24] because it contained this
final verse. She did not consider it equal to the rest of the poem.[25]
After consulting other literary people, in her usual painstaking way,
she decided to have the first draft published.[26] It will be noted
that in the first verse “vintage” has been substituted for “wine
press.” The first line of the third verse read originally,
I have read a burning gospel writ in fiery rows of steel.
The later version,
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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