Rejuvenation -- Fiction; Science fiction; Short stories
In the tiny front hall she hesitated, then opened the door inward
about eight inches. Deftly the man stuck the broad brown toe of his
shoe into the opening and looked down at her. She grinned as she saw
his expression of shock.
She was old, really old. Her sparse white hair was pulled so tightly
into a knob on top of her head that the plentiful wrinkles on her
forehead and around her eyes seemed to run vertically, giving her an
oriental look. The hand she rested on the door jamb was a waxy-white
claw, a blue vein standing up prominently under the skin tight-drawn
over gnarly finger joints. He had probably never seen a woman much
past middle age.
"Well?" Her croak was high and rough.
* * * * *
The young man recovered himself and began his spiel. "Madame, I
represent one of the best-known and most reputable firms in the
country. Our products have received three international medals for
purity and effective performance. They...."
"What are you selling, young man?"
"I have the privilege of being a field representative for Taffeta
Beauty Aids. Please accept this generous ten-ounce bottle of our
Diamond Dew Refreshest Lotion...." He reached into his side pocket and
brought it out, offered it with the most appreciative smile, his 'you
hardly need this' smile.
Her hand did not reach out. "I don't want any. Goodbye!" The door
tightened against his foot.
"But madame," his foot did not budge and his smile became both
engaging and pleading, "all I ask is a chance to show you our line.
Our products sell themselves. Besides, I'm paid on a demonstration
basis--so much for every potential customer who receives our free
sample and so much for every home demonstration. You wouldn't want me
to lose two-fifty when it would take only six and a third minutes of
your time exactly to look over one of the most amazing displays
ever...."
"Well, I don't know...."
"I know you'll enjoy watching our Tissue Cleanser in action and seeing
the new simplicity of our Home Re--...." (oops, he'd almost said it)
"... Hair Relustrification Kit. I promise you that your few minutes
won't be wasted."
"Yours would be, young man. I don't buy that stuff."
"You may be one of the lucky few women who don't need our products,
but I don't think you can say that before you've seen them."
"I never did see such persistence, honest to goodness!" Her face
assumed a crabbed smile. "Come along then."
* * * * *
She moved back from the door into the darkness of the house; and the
salesman shifted his case back to his left hand, pushed the front door
wide and took a quick long step inside. He was just in time to hear
the slight click of the closing of a second door in front of him. He
reached for the knob, turned it; but the door was locked. The outside
door still stood open, caught by the end of the sample case.
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