The works of John Dryden, now first collected in eighteen volumes. Volume 12Dryden, John
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The works of John Dryden, now first collected in eighteen volumes. Volume 12
Dryden, John
English literature
Virgil is much the closest of any Roman poet, and the Latin
hexameter has more feet than the English heroick.
Besides all this, an author has the choice of his own thoughts and
words, which a translator has not; he is confined by the sense of the
inventor to those expressions which are the nearest to it: so that
Virgil, studying brevity, and having the command of his own language,
could bring those words into a narrow compass, which a translator
cannot render without circumlocutions. In short, they, who have called
him the torture of grammarians, might also have called him the plague
of translators; for he seems to have studied not to be translated. I
own that, endeavouring to turn his "Nisus and Euryalus" as close as I
was able, I have performed that episode too literally; that, giving
more scope to "Mezentius and Lausus," that version, which has more
of the majesty of Virgil, has less of his conciseness; and all that
I can promise for myself, is only, that I have done both better than
Ogleby, and perhaps as well as Caro; so that, methinks, I come like a
malefactor, to make a speech upon the gallows, and to warn all other
poets, by my sad example, from the sacrilege of translating Virgil.
Yet, by considering him so carefully as I did before my attempt, I have
made some faint resemblance of him; and, had I taken more time, might
possibly have succeeded better; but never so well as to have satisfied
myself.
He who excels all other poets in his own language, were it possible
to do him right, must appear above them in our tongue, which, as my
Lord Roscommon justly observes, approaches nearest to the Roman in its
majesty; nearest indeed, but with a vast interval betwixt them. There
is an inimitable grace in Virgil's words, and in them principally
consists that beauty, which gives so inexpressible a pleasure to
him who best understands their force. This diction of his (I must
once again say) is never to be copied; and, since it cannot, he will
appear but lame in the best translation. The turns of his verse, his
breakings, his propriety, his numbers, and his gravity, I have as far
imitated, as the poverty of our language, and the hastiness of my
performance, would allow. I may seem sometimes to have varied from
his sense; but I think the greatest variations may be fairly deduced
from him; and where I leave his commentators, it may be I understand
him better: at least I writ without consulting them in many places.
But two particular lines in Mezentius and Lausus, I cannot so easily
excuse. They are indeed remotely allied to Virgil's sense; but they
are too like the trifling tenderness of Ovid, and were printed before
I had considered them enough to alter them. The first of them I have
forgotten, and cannot easily retrieve, because the copy is at the
press. The second is this:
When Lausus died, I was already slain.
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