The works of John Dryden, now first collected in eighteen volumes. Volume 14Dryden, John
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The works of John Dryden, now first collected in eighteen volumes. Volume 14
Dryden, John
English literature
Besides this difficulty (with which I have struggled, and made a shift
to pass it over,) there is one remaining, which is insuperable to
all translators. We are bound to our author's sense, though with the
latitudes already mentioned; for I think it not so sacred, as that one
_iota_ must not be added or diminished, on pain of an _anathema_. But
slaves we are, and labour on another man's plantation; we dress the
vineyard, but the wine is the owner's: if the soil be sometimes barren,
then we are sure of being scourged: if it be fruitful, and our care
succeeds, we are not thanked; for the proud reader will only say, the
poor drudge has done his duty. But this is nothing to what follows;
for, being obliged to make his sense intelligible, we are forced to
untune our own verses, that we may give his meaning to the reader. He,
who invents, is master of his thoughts and words: he can turn and vary
them as he pleases, till he renders them harmonious; but the wretched
translator has no such privilege: for, being tied to the thoughts, he
must make what music he can in the expression; and, for this reason, it
cannot always be so sweet as that of the original. There is a beauty of
sound, as Ségrais has observed, in some Latin words, which is wholly
lost in any modern language. He instances in that _mollis amaracus_, on
which Venus lays Cupid, in the First Æneïd. If I should translate it
_sweet-marjoram,_ as the word signifies, the reader would think I had
mistaken Virgil: for those village-words, as I may call them, give us
a mean idea of the thing; but the sound of the Latin is so much more
pleasing, by the just mixture of the vowels with the consonants, that
it raises our fancies to conceive somewhat more noble than a common
herb, and to spread roses under him, and strew lilies over him; a bed
not unworthy the grandson of the goddess.
If I cannot copy his harmonious numbers, how shall I imitate his noble
flights, where his thoughts and words are equally sublime? _Quem_
----_quisquis studet æmulari,
----cæratis ope Dædaleâ
Nititur pennis, vitreo daturus
Nomina ponto_.
What modern language, or what poet, can express the majestic beauty of
this one verse, amongst a thousand others?
_Aude, hospes, contemnere opes, et te quoque dignum
Finge deo._----
For my part, I am lost in the admiration of it: I contemn the world
when I think on it, and myself when I translate it.[86]
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