Knights and knighthood -- Poetry; Romances, English
p. 10, l. 277 ff. There is nothing in Torrent’s words which could lead
the princess to a conclusion like that. I think that after l. 276 one
stanza is wanting.
p. 11, l. 286-8. As to the contents of these lines, Kölbing refers me to
_Englische studien_, vol. IV. p. 133 f., where F. Liebrecht mentions a
passage in _Sir Beves of Hamtoun_, according to which a king’s
daughter,--if she is a pure virgin,--can never be hurt by a lion. Here
we have another proof for this remarkable bit of folk-lore.
p. 11, l. 292 = l. 329.
p. 11, l. 303 = l. 342.
p. 11, l. 305. I am not quite sure whether I was right in substituting
the prince’s name--which is mentioned once more, the first time, as it
were, l. 341--for the name of his father’s kingdom; but I didn’t see any
other way of restoring the rhyme.
p. 12, l. 311. Cf. l. 469 and Skeat’s note to _Sir Thopas_, l. 1927.
p. 12, l. 334. Instead of _he_ I should prefer to read _they_: Torrent
has just admonished the prisoners to cheer up.
p. 13, l. 344. There must be something wrong in this line, because the
name of the third Earl’s son is missing; to write _the third_ instead of
_of_ may not suffice to put the text right; even the names _Torren_ and
_Berweyne_ seem to me very suspicious.
p. 14, l. 379. Cf. _Ipomadon_, l. 4245, _for Crystys dede_; _Crystys_
was substituted by Kölbing for _mannes_, which is clearly wrong; he
could as well have chosen _godes_.
p. 15, l. 393 ff. Cf. Kölbing’s note to _Tristrem_, l. 736.
p. 16, l. 427. Of this allusion to Veland, Halliwell treats in his
edition of _Sir Torrent_, p. vii f. Cf. Zupitza, _Ein zeugnis für die
Wieland-sage_, _Zeitschrift für deutsches Alterthum_, Vol. XIX,
p. 129 f.
p. 16, l. 429-31. The line which follows l. 429 in the MS. is
superfluous; it damages the metre; and the rhyme with l. 430 won’t do.
The old king wishes to say; ‘I have seen the day when, if this sword
wielded by me fell on any one, he was considered done for, doomed to
death.’ Therefore l. 431, _I fawght therfor I told_ has been corrected
into _Fawe they were I-told_. The scribe did not understand the
obsolescent word _fawe_ or _faye_, so he wrote the nearest word to it to
make sense, _I-told_ = ‘held, considered.’--I. Hall.
p. 17, l. 458. Cf. Breul’s note to _Sir Gowther_, l. 410.
p. 17, l. 465. Cf. l. 2061 f.
p. 20, l. 542. The scribe, who evidently didn’t know the pretty rare
word _clow_, has spoilt it to _colod_, or _colvd_; the same rhyme,
_clouȝ_, _drouȝ_, _anouȝ_ occurs in _Sir Tristrem_, l. 1761 ff. Nor did
the scribe know the word _swowe_ = ‘noise,’ and changed it to _swayne_;
cf. Hall. Dict., p. 843: _He come to him with a swowe_.
p. 20, l. 543. _Of and on_, off and on, intermittently.
p. 21, l. 555. _schyld_ is not to the point here, Torrent having only
his sword at hand. The scribe has forgotten what he has said himself,
l. 526 and 549; cf. l. 652.
p. 21, l. 582-4. We meet with this description twice more in the poem,
ll. 1514-16, and ll. 1858-60.
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