Dramatists -- Juvenile fiction; Radio acting -- Juvenile fiction; Radio broadcasting -- Juvenile fiction
The chair spun around. “Mo—ther!” The voice that came out of the chair
had a mocking, infantile bleat. Startled, Joe stopped.
“Mo—ther!” Vic Wylie’s frantic hands were in his reddish hair. “You’re
not a five-year-old brat whining for a lollypop. You’re fifteen. You
feel you’re a man. You’re suddenly aware that the most wonderful woman
in the world is fighting a hard battle. You want to help. Put that into
your voice.”
Joe tried again.
“No, no. Not ‘Mo—ther’ with a valley between the two syllables. That’s
the way a young child pules. You’re fifteen. You feel that you ought to
be the man of the family. You’re long past the ‘Mo—ther’ stage.”
Joe put snap into it. “Mother.”
Wylie groaned. “Too abrupt; too cold. You’ve got to get that ‘Mother’
with a depth, a feeling.... Try it again.”
Joe drew a breath. “Mother.”
“Now you’re swinging back to the cute stage. Something in between the
two. Get it.”
A shaken Joe Carlin obeyed the will of an inexorable taskmaster. Sweat
beaded his upper lip; sweat ran down his cheeks. For fifteen minutes he
struggled to put into one word what a slave-driver wanted put into that
one word. Then Wylie snapped his fingers.
“Carry that last ‘Mother’ in your ear. That’s the inflection I want.
Give me the rest of it.”
Sweat dropped on page four of the script. Joe read:
Dick: Mother, don’t shake your head at me like that. You must
listen to me. I’m not trying to duck out of high school. I can
get through at night. I can get college at night. Oh, I know
fellows talk about night study and never get to it. But I know
what you’re trying to do for me. Mother, I won’t let you down.
But I can’t get it your way. How long would it take me to become
a doctor? Ten years? What would I be doing for those ten years,
living off you? Letting you hustle off every morning to a job? A
man can’t let a woman support him like this if he’s strong
enough to handle a job. Don’t you see, Mother?
Wylie leaped from his chair. “I’m your audience this minute and I see
nothing. No picture, no emotion. You give me nothing. Nothing but words.
You don’t act. You read. Anybody can read.”
Joe Carlin sighed.
“Can’t you feel the scene? Can’t you see it? Are you a stick?” The
producer appeared to be on the verge of horrified tears. “Take eight
words: ‘A man can’t let a woman support him—’ Delicious. Remember, this
is from a fifteen-year-old boy. Delicious comedy. But it’s comedy
touched with pathos, and the high courage of youth, and the glorious
dreams of the young. This boy must speak as a man. Doesn’t he call
himself a man? A man’s speech with the boy showing through. Act it. Live
it. The man with the boy showing through. Sir Galahad in knickers.”
Joe was desperate. “If you’ll give me time, Mr. Wylie—”
“Time,” the producer groaned. “There’s never enough time in radio.” He
went back to his chair.
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