“They’ve caught her to Westholm’s saddle-bow,
Sister Helen,
And her moonlit hair gleams white in its flow.”
“Let it turn whiter than winter snow,
Little brother!”
(O Mother, Mary Mother,
Woe-withered gold, between Hell and Heaven!)
Besides these there are two new stanzas, one going before, and the other
following after, the six stanzas quoted, but as the scattered passages
involve no farther incident, and are rather of interest as explaining
and perfecting the idea here expressed, than valuable in themselves, I
do not reprint them.
I think it must be allowed, by fit judges, that nothing more subtly
conceived than this incident can be met with in English poetry, though
something akin to it was projected by Coleridge in an episode of his
contemplated _Michael Scott_. It is--in the full sense of an abused
epithet--too weird to be called picturesque. But the crowning merit of
the poem still lies, as I have said, in the domain of character. Through
all the outbursts of her ignescent hate Sister Helen can never lose the
ineradicable relics of her human love:
But he and I are sadder still.
As Rossetti from time to time made changes in his poems, he transcribed
the amended verses in a copy of the Tauchnitz edition which he kept
constantly by him. Upon reference to this little volume some days after
his death, I discovered that he had prefaced _Sister Helen_ with a
note written in pencil, of which he had given me the substance in
conversation about the time of the publication of the altered version,
but which he abandoned while passing the book through the press. The
note (evidently designed to precede the ballad) runs:
It is not unlikely that some may be offended at seeing the
additions made thus late to the ballad of _S. H._ My best
excuse is that I believe some will wonder with myself that
such a climax did not enter into the first conception.
At the foot of the poem this further note is written:
I wrote this ballad either in 1851 or early in 1852. It was
printed in a thing called _The Düsseldorf Annual_ in (I
think) 1853--published in Germany. {*}