The Divine Comedy, Volume 1, Hell — Dante Alighieri — John Shaqi
The Divine Comedy, Volume 1, Hell
Dante Alighieri · en
CANTO XXXIV.
Ninth Circle: Traitors. Fourth ring: Judecca.—Lucifer.—Judas, Brutus
and Cassius.—Centre of the universe.—Passage from Hell.—Ascent to the
surface of the Southern hemisphere.
INTRODUCTION.
So many versions of the Divine Comedy exist in English that a new one
might well seem needless. But most of these translations are in verse,
and the intellectual temper of our time is impatient of a transmutation
in which substance is sacrificed for form’s sake, and the new form is
itself different from the original. The conditions of verse in
different languages vary so widely as to make any versified translation
of a poem but an imperfect reproduction of the archetype. It is like an
imperfect mirror that renders but a partial likeness, in which
essential features are blurred or distorted. Dante himself, the first
modern critic, declared that “nothing harmonized by a musical bond can
be transmuted from its own speech without losing all its sweetness and
harmony,” and every fresh attempt at translation affords a new proof of
the truth of his assertion. Each language exhibits its own special
genius in its poetic forms. Even when they are closely similar in
rhythmical method their poetic effect is essentially different, their
individuality is distinct. The hexameter of the Iliad is not the
hexameter of the Aeneid. And if this be the case in respect to related
forms, it is even more obvious in respect to forms peculiar to one
language, like the terza rima of the Italian, for which it is
impossible to find a satisfactory equivalent in another tongue.
If, then, the attempt be vain to reproduce the form or to represent its
effect in a translation, yet the substance of a poem may have such
worth that it deserves to be known by readers who must read it in their
own tongue or not at all. In this case the aim of the translator should
be to render the substance fully, exactly, and with as close a
correspondence to the tone and style of the original as is possible
between prose and poetry. Of the charm, of the power of the poem such a
translation can give but an inadequate suggestion; the musical bond was
of its essence, and the loss of the musical bond is the loss of the
beauty to which form and substance mutually contributed, and in which
they were both alike harmonized and sublimated. The rhythmic life of
the original is its vital spirit, and the translation losing this vital
spirit is at best as the dull plaster cast to the living marble or the
breathing bronze. The intellectual substance is there; and if the work
be good, something of the emotional quality may be conveyed; the
imagination may mould the prose as it moulded the verse,—but, after
all, “translations are but as turn-coated things at best,” as Howell
said in one of his Familiar Letters.