The style and plan of the Timaeus differ greatly from that of any
other of the Platonic dialogues. The language is weighty, abrupt,
and in some passages sublime. But Plato has not the same mastery
over his instrument which he exhibits in the Phaedrus or
Symposium. Nothing can exceed the beauty or art of the
introduction, in which he is using words after his accustomed
manner. But in the rest of the work the power of language seems
to fail him, and the dramatic form is wholly given up. He could
write in one style, but not in another, and the Greek language
had not as yet been fashioned by any poet or philosopher to
describe physical phenomena. The early physiologists had
generally written in verse; the prose writers, like Democritus
and Anaxagoras, as far as we can judge from their fragments,
never attained to a periodic style. And hence we find the same
sort of clumsiness in the Timaeus of Plato which characterizes
the philosophical poem of Lucretius. There is a want of flow and
often a defect of rhythm; the meaning is sometimes obscure, and
there is a greater use of apposition and more of repetition than
occurs in Plato’s earlier writings. The sentences are less
closely connected and also more involved; the antecedents of
demonstrative and relative pronouns are in some cases remote and
perplexing. The greater frequency of participles and of absolute
constructions gives the effect of heaviness. The descriptive
portion of the Timaeus retains traces of the first Greek prose
composition; for the great master of language was speaking on a
theme with which he was imperfectly acquainted, and had no words
in which to express his meaning. The rugged grandeur of the
opening discourse of Timaeus may be compared with the more
harmonious beauty of a similar passage in the Phaedrus.