Biblical Revision: considerations in favour of a revised translation of Holy ScriptureSlater, Edward
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Biblical Revision: considerations in favour of a revised translation of Holy Scripture
Slater, Edward
Bible -- Translating; Bible -- Versions
For where a testament _is_, there For where a covenant _is_, there
must also of necessity be the must of necessity be brought in
death of the testator. the death of the mediating
_sacrifice_.
For a testament _is_ of force
after men are dead: otherwise it For a covenant is valid over dead
is of no strength at all while _sacrifices_: since it is never
the testator liveth. of any force while the mediating
_sacrifice_ continues alive.
Heb. xii. 18.
To the mount that might be To the mount that could be
touched. touched.
Heb. xiii. 4.
Marriage _is_ honourable in all, Let marriage be honourable in
and the bed undefiled. all, and the bed _be_ undefiled.
1 Pet. iii. 20.
Were saved by water. Were saved through the water
(brought safely through).
1 Pet. iv. 8.
Shall cover the multitude of Will cover a multitude of sins.
sins.
2 Pet. i. 16.
For we have not followed For we did not follow cunningly
cunningly devised fables, when we devised fables when we made known
made known unto you . . . unto you . . .
2 Pet. ii. 1, 3.
And bring upon themselves swift . . . and their destruction
destruction . . . and their slumbereth not (_destruction_,
damnation slumbereth not. precisely the same word as
before).
2 Pet. ii. 5.
Noah the eighth _person_. Noah, with seven others.
2 Pet. ii. 14.
Cursed children. Children of the curse.
Rev. iv. 6.
Four beasts. Four living creatures.
Rev. x. 6.
That there should be time no That there should be no more
longer. delay.
Thus far, by way of specimen of the improvement of which the authorized
version is susceptible on the score of fidelity to the original. The
instances might have been multiplied indefinitely, but we designed only a
specimen. We would repeat that there is a large amount of improvement
practicable in elucidating and enforcing the sense, when it is not
positively misrepresented, that is less fitted for such display, and
which alone it would require the transcription of a large portion of the
Bible to render apparent.
“Claudite jam rivos pueri; sat prata biberunt.”
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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