Dialogue; English literature -- History and criticism
Again, I think there is little doubt that the ordinary reader is
fatigued by too much talking, and that a long novel, mainly relying
on dialogue and reducing narrative to a merely subordinate position,
is in great danger of becoming tedious. This it may do in one of two
ways――or, if it is very unfortunate, in both――at different places. The
writer may try to tell too much by dialogue, with the result that his
characters speak at great length, and he topples over the line which
divides dialogue from speech-making. Or, on the other hand, alive to
the perils of speech-making, he may try to cut it all up into question
and answer, and to enliven it by constant epigrams or some other form
of wit. This latter expedient may not bore the reader so much as the
speech-making, but it will probably fatigue him more. Dialogue does,
in fact, make a greater claim on the reader than narrative. I think
this is true even when it is good dialogue. Something may be done to
help him by skilful comment or description――clever stage-directions
in effect――but none the less he is deprived, or curtailed, of much
of the assistance on his way which the narrative form can give him.
I think that probably the best advice to offer to a novice would be:
As few long conversations as possible――but as many short ones. Let
the dialogue break up the narrative, and the narrative cut short any
tendency to prolixity in the dialogue.
Just now I referred to the possibility of assisting dialogue by
comment or description, much as when you read a play you are assisted
to follow and appreciate the lines written to be spoken on the stage
by the directions inserted to guide the actor. This reference, I dare
say, raised in your minds the thought that the dialogue I have been
speaking of――dialogue as it is used in novels――is very rarely pure
dialogue at all. The objection is well founded, and its application
is wide, though the degree of its application varies immensely. You
may find pure dialogue, without stage-directions, here and there,
even in novels. George Borrow, for instance, is fond of it, and is
a master of a peculiar quality of it. But far the more general form
is dialogue assisted by comment and description――a hybrid kind of
composition, in which the author plays a double part, speaking through
the characters’ mouths at one moment, describing their actions,
gestures, even their unspoken thoughts, at the next. This is the normal
form of novel dialogue. The variations occur in the relative amount
of this description or comment――of this stage-direction, as I have
called it. And I call it that because this comment or description takes
the place of what they call ‘business’ on the stage. The actor’s task
is divided between his words and his ‘business’, and the playwright
is entitled to rely on the ‘business’ to help out the words, just as
the novelist describes or comments on the actions and gestures of his
speakers, in order to assist and elucidate the meaning of the actual
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