“The Dialogues are amongst the best parts of the book; but in several
of them the tone of the speakers, of those especially who are in
humble life, is too correct and elevated, and therefore out of
character. This takes away from their effect. I think it would be
very advisable that Mr. Borrow should go over them with reference to
this point, simplifying a few of the terms of expression and
introducing a few contractions—_don’ts_, _can’ts_, &c. This would
improve them greatly.”
Now the truth is that Mr. Murray’s reader, whoever he was, {60} pointed
out the one great blemish in _all_ Borrow’s dramatic pictures of gipsy
life, wheresoever the scene may be laid. Take his pictures of English
gipsies. The reader has only to compare the dialogue between gipsies
given in that photographic study of Romany life ‘In Gipsy Tents’ with the
dialogues in ‘Lavengro’ to see how the illusion in Borrow’s narrative is
disturbed by the uncolloquial vocabulary of the speakers. After all
allowance is made for the Romany’s love of high-sounding words, it
considerably weakens our belief in Mr. and Mrs. Petulengro, Ursula, and
the rest, to find them using complex sentences and bookish words which,
even among English people, are rarely heard in conversation.
Dr. Knapp says emphatically that Borrow never created a character, and
that the originals are easily recognizable to one who thoroughly knows
the times and Borrow’s writings. This is true, no doubt, as regards
people with whom he was brought into contact at Norwich, and, indeed,
generally before the period of his gipsy wanderings. It must not be
supposed, however, that such characters as the man who “touched” to avert
the evil chance and the man who taught himself Chinese are in any sense
portraits. They have so many of Borrow’s own peculiarities that they
might rather be called portraits of himself. There was nothing that
Borrow strove against with more energy than the curious impulse, which he
seems to have shared with Dr. Johnson, to touch the objects along his
path in order to save himself from the evil chance. He never conquered
the superstition. In walking through Richmond Park he would step out of
his way constantly to touch a tree, and he was offended if the friend he
was with seemed to observe it. Many of the peculiarities of the man who
taught himself Chinese were also Borrow’s own.
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