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The life of the poem lies in the instinctive thought of immortality,
and in the sense of neighbourhood and close companionship between the
quick and the dead. It is the same thought, the same sense, that throws
its magical light on the tale of Lucy Gray, and permits those last
verses which make the whole thing wonderful, and the common story fine--
Yet some maintain that to this day
She is a living child;
That you may see sweet Lucy Gray
Upon the lonesome wild.
O’er rough and smooth, she trips along
And never looks behind;
And sings a solitary song
That whistles in the wind.
The poem of ‘We are Seven,’ expressing a conception precious to
Wordsworth, yet not expressing it exactly as he would have it
expressed, was, after its first publication, subjected to more changes
than any composition of its length. Of course the direct address to
‘dear brother Jem’--‘A little child, dear brother Jem’--is removed.
Wordsworth only allowed it to stand at first because he relished the
joke of hitching in his friend James Tobin’s name, and this gratuitous
reference to a good fellow, a bad critic, and the brother of the author
of ‘The Honeymoon,’ was promptly suppressed. ‘I sing a song to them,’
is substituted for a line far more effective with the context--‘I sit
and sing to them.’ Another line, beautiful with the context--‘And all
the summer dry’--yields to the line ‘And when the grass was dry.’ But
at one point ‘little Jane’ becomes ‘sister Jane,’ perhaps happily,
and, ‘Quick was the little maid’s reply’ gives the desired sense of
readiness and certainty better than the line it effaces. It is the old
story of careful verbal alterations--some are for the better, some are
for the worse.
More than one of the graver pastoral poems are missing, naturally
enough, to my rare book. I do not find in it that pastoral of
‘Michael,’ which of itself is quite enough, it seems to me, to
ensure to its writer a fame which shall last as long as any judges
of Literature remain--any judges who, caring for style itself, care
supremely for its fit association with the sentiment it is its business
to express. ‘Michael’ is intensely realistic: in the best sense it is
more realistic than anything of Crabbe’s, and the verse that seems
to be halting is but prosaic deliberately. The effect is sought for,
and the effect is gained. The pathos is all the greater because the
elevation of language is so slight and infrequent. When it occurs, it
tells! That poem belongs to the next series of the poet’s works--to
the little collection published first, I think, in 1802, and assuming
to itself the title of _Lyrical Ballads; Volume the Second_. There had
before been no hint of a second, and the first is complete in itself.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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