Short story classics (Foreign), Vol. 4, French I — John Shaqi
Short story classics (Foreign), Vol. 4, French I
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Short story classics (Foreign), Vol. 4, French I
French fiction -- Translations into English; Short stories, French -- Translations into English
to me that if I laid my hand on the firm, rounded throat, it would be
cold as marble to the touch. No, my friend, the blood does not flow
beneath that ivory skin, the tide of life does not flush those delicate
fibres, the purple veins that trace a network beneath the transparent
amber of her brow and breast. Here the pulse seems to beat, there it
is motionless, life and death are at strife in every detail; here you
see a woman, there a statue, there again a corpse. Your creation is
incomplete. You had only power to breathe a portion of your soul into
your beloved work. The fire of Prometheus died out again and again in
your hands; many a spot in your picture has not been touched by the
divine flame.”
“But how is it, dear master?” Porbus asked respectfully, while the
young man with difficulty repressed his strong desire to beat the
critic.
“Ah!” said the old man, “it is this! You have halted between two
manners. You have hesitated between drawing and color, between the
dogged attention to detail, the stiff precision of the German masters
and the dazzling glow, the joyous exuberance of Italian painters. You
have set yourself to imitate Hans Holbein and Titian, Albrecht Dürer
and Paul Veronese in a single picture. A magnificent ambition truly,
but what has come of it? Your work has neither the severe charm of a
dry execution nor the magical illusion of Italian _chiaroscuro_.
Titian’s rich golden coloring poured into Albrecht Dürer’s austere
outlines has shattered them, like molten bronze bursting through the
mold that is not strong enough to hold it. In other places the outlines
have held firm, imprisoning and obscuring the magnificent, glowing
flood of Venetian color. The drawing of the face is not perfect, the
coloring is not perfect; traces of that unlucky indecision are to be
seen everywhere. Unless you felt strong enough to fuse the two opposed
manners in the fire of your own genius, you should have cast in your
lot boldly with the one or the other, and so have obtained the unity
which simulates one of the conditions of life itself. Your work is only
true in the centres; your outlines are false, they project nothing,
there is no hint of anything behind them. There is truth here,” said
the old man, pointing to the breast of the Saint, “and again here,”
he went on, indicating the rounded shoulder. “But there,” once more
returning to the column of the throat, “everything is false. Let us go
no further into detail; you would be disheartened.”
The old man sat down on a stool, and remained a while without speaking,
with his face buried in his hands.
“Yet I studied that throat from the life, dear master,” Porbus began;
“it happens sometimes, for our misfortune, that real effects in nature
look improbable when transferred to canvas--”
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