Eloisa : $b or, A series of original letters — Jean-Jacques Rousseau — John Shaqi
Eloisa : $b or, A series of original letters
Jean-Jacques Rousseau · en
I confess, the idioms of the two languages are very different, and
therefore that it will, in some instances, be impossible to reach the
sublime delicacy of expression in an elegant French writer; but in
return, their language is frequently so vague and diffuse, that it
must be entirely the fault of the English translator if he does not
often improve upon his original; but this will never be the case,
unless we sit down with a design to translate the _ideas_ rather than
the _words_ of our author.
Most of the translations which I have read, appear like a thin gauze
spread over the original: the French language appears through every
paragraph; but it is entirely owing to the want of bread, the want of
attention, or want of ability in the translator. Mr. Pope, and some
few others, have shewn the world, that not only the ideas of the most
sublime writers may be accurately expressed in a translation, but that
it is possible to improve and adorn them with beauties peculiar to the
English language.
If in the following pages, the reader expects to find a servile,
literal, translation, he will be mistaken. I never could, and never
will, copy the failings of my author, be his reputation ever so great,
in those instances where they evidently proceed from want of
attention. Mr. Rousseau writes with great ease and elegance, but he
sometimes wants propriety of thought, and accuracy of expression.
As to the real merit of this performance, the universal approbation it
has met with is a stronger recommendation than any thing I could say
in its praise.
A Dialogue Between a Man of Letters and Mr. J. J. Rousseau
N. There, take your Manuscript: I have read it quite through.
R. _Quite through?_ I understand you: you think there are not many
readers will follow your example.
N. _Vel duo, vel nemo._
R. _Turpe & miserabile._ But let me have your sincere opinion.
N. I dare not.
R. You have dared to the utmost by that single word: Pray explain
yourself.
N. My opinion depends upon your answer to this question: is it a real,
or fictitious, correspondence?
R. I cannot perceive the consequence. In order to give one’s
sentiments of a book, of what importance can it be to know how it was
written?
N. In this case it is of great importance. A portrait has its merit if
it resembles the original, be that original ever so strange; but in a
picture which is the produce of imagination, every human figure should
resemble human nature, or the picture is of no value: yet supposing
them both good in their kind, there is this difference, the portrait
is interesting but to a few people, whilst the picture will please the
public in general.
R. I conceive your meaning. If these letters are portraits, they are
uninteresting; if they are pictures, they are ill done. Is it not so?
N. Precisely.
R. Thus I shall snatch your answers before you speak. But, as I
cannot reply, directly to your question, I must beg leave to propose
one in my turn. Suppose the worst: my Eloisa----